Rate and fix my FROG deck ?

I don't have a clue how to work FROG decks, but to me it looks like you might need more support cards to get what you need out on the field . For example, if you need ways of summoning monsters quickly, use Ultimate Offering or Double Summon. Take out Jar of Greed, it's banned (if you care about that sort of thing). Plus, take out mind control, it's effect is only useful for tributing and you need to play life points, there are cards that can do that kind of thing a lot better, like Mausoleum of the Emperor (if you are using it just for the control then still get rid of it, its pointless for one turn and you can replace it with something more useful) . Can't rate it because i don't know how this deck works. Hope this helps !