Wednesday, August 17, 2011

Help embellishing this story idea?

You started off with an unusual idea, a girl in a boys boarding school, and then went on to mention horrible accidents. A girl attending a boys boarding school /is/ the story. Everything about her attendance there will bring up new and strange incidents. Focus on that. Piling on too many unlikely events makes the story unbelievable and hard to relate to.

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